User contributions for Stephen Hui

23 December 2024

• 07:4407:44, 23 December 2024 diff hist −41 m Scott E. Parazynski Removed mid-sentence external link to Sam Cossman's personal website per WP:NOELBODY: "With rare exceptions, external links should not be used in the body of an article"; Cossman's site isn't relevant enough to Parazynski to merit inclusion in the External Links section, so just deleted the link current
• 07:4007:40, 23 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Scott E. Parazynski Moved reference link from the middle of a word to the end of the sentence; no content changes
• 07:3707:37, 23 December 2024 diff hist +15 Morley Edited bullet for Morley, Alberta, Canada to reflect recent name change to Mînî Thnî current
• 07:3607:36, 23 December 2024 diff hist +347 Mînî Thnî Added sentence describing name change from Morley to Mînî Thnî current
• 07:3207:32, 23 December 2024 diff hist −4 m Mînî Thnî Reworded slightly awkward sentence: "operated by the Methodists was in Mînî Thnî" --> "was operated by Methodists in Mînî Thnî"
• 07:2907:29, 23 December 2024 diff hist −2 m Mînî Thnî Replaced an en dash in a compound adjective with a regular hyphen

22 December 2024

• 02:4402:44, 22 December 2024 diff hist −21 SpaceX Raptor →Testing: Jokey/informal "rapid unscheduled disassembly (RUD) occurred" --> "was destroyed" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:2302:23, 22 December 2024 diff hist −22 SpaceX Raptor Reworded a sentence to remove a reference to a date that wasn't supported by a reference, and which wasn't crucial to the meaning of the article
• 02:1602:16, 22 December 2024 diff hist −7 Ribbon of Saint George →Terminology: Changed improper nouns from capitalized to lowercase, and changed incorrect reference to Moskva as a battlecruiser to refer to it as a cruiser current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 December 2024

• 05:5905:59, 20 December 2024 diff hist 0 Scott Storch →Early life: Moved period outside of quotation marks per MOS:INOROUT: "Include terminal punctuation within the quotation marks only if it was present in the original material, and otherwise place it after the closing quotation mark" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

19 December 2024

• 16:0616:06, 19 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Tulsi Gabbard Improper noun "Karma" --> "karma" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:1706:17, 19 December 2024 diff hist +16 Canada Industrial Relations Board Updated opening sentence to describe what the CIRB is ("an independent tribunal"); the previous opening sentence just described what the CIRB is responsible for current

18 December 2024

• 04:4104:41, 18 December 2024 diff hist +1 SpaceX Raptor →Design: Grammar: "aiming to support airline-level of safety required" --> "aiming to support the airline-level safety required" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3304:33, 18 December 2024 diff hist 0 Mariah Carey →Personal life: "Caesarean section" --> "caesarean section" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3004:30, 18 December 2024 diff hist +5 m Mariah Carey Rearranged an awkward sentence; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

16 December 2024

• 04:0804:08, 16 December 2024 diff hist 0 Saxsquatch →Personal life: Section heading “Personal Life” —> “Personal life” per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings [...] should be presented in sentence case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

15 December 2024

• 16:5316:53, 15 December 2024 diff hist +44 ChatGPT Added a description of 01-preview to a table, which previously just described it as "which has not been released yet", which is no longer correct

13 December 2024

• 02:2802:28, 13 December 2024 diff hist +1 Ellis Stanbury Added a period to the end of a sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:2602:26, 13 December 2024 diff hist −1 Railway roundhouse Capitalized the first word in an image caption, and removed its period per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings [...] should be presented in sentence case" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:1802:18, 13 December 2024 diff hist +33 Hybrid automatic repeat request Tagged article as being "too technical for most readers to understand" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:1702:17, 13 December 2024 diff hist 0 Hybrid automatic repeat request →Simple hybrid ARQ: Section title "Simple Hybrid ARQ" --> "Simple hybrid ARQ" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings [...] should be presented in sentence case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 December 2024

• 05:2405:24, 11 December 2024 diff hist 0 Broadview station (Saskatchewan) "located originally" --> "originally located" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:2205:22, 11 December 2024 diff hist −1 Johnny Witts Removed period from a caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:2105:21, 11 December 2024 diff hist −2 Litoral Gas "Their role" --> "its role" since the company is referred to as a singular entity everywhere else in the article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:4002:40, 11 December 2024 diff hist −13 Yamato-class battleship Redundant "heaviest ever constructed in the world" --> "heaviest ever constructed" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

9 December 2024

• 02:1402:14, 9 December 2024 diff hist −29 Italian landing helicopter dock Trieste →Project and construction: Removed verbiage "according to the provided data"; everything in Wikipedia is supposed to be according to provided data Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

8 December 2024

• 21:2721:27, 8 December 2024 diff hist −1 Syria →Post-Ba'athist Syria: Removed unnecessary comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:2402:24, 8 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Hawthornden Prize "Awarded for For" --> "Awarded for", and removed a period from a sentence fragment in the infobox current
• 02:2302:23, 8 December 2024 diff hist −22 m Hawthornden Prize Rearranged opening section, as it started out describing the prize's history as opposed to what it actually is; no content changes
• 02:1102:11, 8 December 2024 diff hist −144 Anti-griddle Reworded the opening section to reflect the fact that sources suggest that the device was developed (not just inspired) by Achatz, and to combine two sentences which basically repeated the same information current

5 December 2024

• 07:0507:05, 5 December 2024 diff hist +457 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ronnie Harris (sprinter) →Ronnie Harris (sprinter): Reply Tag: Reply
• 06:5006:50, 5 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Kronprinsessegade "fine Neoclassical houses" --> "Neoclassical houses" per MOS:PUFFERY: "Instead of making subjective proclamations about a subject's importance, use facts and attribution to demonstrate it." current
• 06:4806:48, 5 December 2024 diff hist −14 m Jimmy Wilson (footballer, born 1942) Deleted empty "Club" section current
• 06:4706:47, 5 December 2024 diff hist −11 m Leon Klatzkin "CBS television" --> "CBS", as the former does not appear to have been an official name of the network current
• 06:4406:44, 5 December 2024 diff hist −806 Leon Klatzkin Deleted a paragraph devoted to purported controversies about Klatzkin's works, which was in gross violation of WP:NPOV and MOS:WEASEL, contained no relevant references, and was rife with grammatical errors
• 06:3706:37, 5 December 2024 diff hist −16 m Torra di Roccapina Copy edit, including changing "the Corsica" --> "Corsica" current
• 06:3406:34, 5 December 2024 diff hist +4 m Man Tera Tan Mera Added "and" before the last entry in a comma-delimited list current
• 06:3206:32, 5 December 2024 diff hist +4 m Clerodendrum speciosissimum Ambiguous "reach up to 4 m" --> "grow up to 4 m tall" current
• 06:3106:31, 5 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Chindro "and/ or" --> "or" current
• 06:3006:30, 5 December 2024 diff hist −352 Chindro Copy edit; merged opening paragraph and the Description section, which basically restated the opening paragraph, and deleted verbiage about the game being played in both rural and urban areas, which referenced a dead website that didn't support the assertion anyway
• 06:2206:22, 5 December 2024 diff hist +5 m Himalayan Art Resources Reworded opening sentence to remove "etc."; no content changes current
• 06:1906:19, 5 December 2024 diff hist −10 Himalayan Art Resources Removed link to website from the opening sentence of the article per WP:EL: "With rare exceptions, external links should not be used in the body of an article. Instead, include appropriate external links in an "External links" section at the end of the article"
• 06:1406:14, 5 December 2024 diff hist −60 m Clivio Piccione Reworded a slightly confusing sentence; no content changes current
• 06:0406:04, 5 December 2024 diff hist +61 Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Sportspeople Listing Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ronnie Harris (sprinter). Tag: Twinkle
• 06:0406:04, 5 December 2024 diff hist +1,252 N Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ronnie Harris (sprinter) Creating deletion discussion page for Ronnie Harris (sprinter). Tag: Twinkle
• 06:0406:04, 5 December 2024 diff hist +1,211 User talk:Doma-w Notification: listing of Ronnie Harris (sprinter) at WP:Articles for deletion. Tag: Twinkle
• 06:0406:04, 5 December 2024 diff hist +61 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Log/2024 December 5 Adding Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ronnie Harris (sprinter). Tag: Twinkle
• 06:0406:04, 5 December 2024 diff hist +448 Ronnie Harris (sprinter) Nominated for deletion; see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ronnie Harris (sprinter). Tag: Twinkle
• 05:5905:59, 5 December 2024 diff hist +27 m Mikra British Cemetery Rephrased a sentence to make it clearer: "addition of locally buried graves" --> "remains were transferred there from other local burial grounds" current
• 05:5405:54, 5 December 2024 diff hist −176 Sheepskin Removed statement that wool is "considered by the medical profession to be hypoallergenic" -- "considered by the medical profession" violates MOS:WEASEL, the reference link is dead and was formerly a small store selling wool (i.e. not a reliable source), and I wasn't able to find any reliable sources supporting this contention current