Wikipedia:Peer review/ITunes/archive1

ITunes

This article should be an easy transition to FA. I just wanted to see what needs to be done. False Prophet 02:04, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Anyone that is helping on this PR should strike the comment that they took care of, then say either done or if you come to the conclusion that it does not need to be doen, say not necesary and then sign your name. Thanks. False Prophet 17:10, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. They may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles). If the following suggestions are completely incorrect about the article, please drop a note on my talk page.

~~Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.~~ Fits guidlines. False Prophet 03:45, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked (Don't link September or Tuesday unless there is really good reason to). Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. Done. False Prophet 16:26, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

~~Per WP:WIAFA, Images should have concise captions.~~ Captions all ready meet this criteria.False Prophet 16:28, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

~~Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.~~ Done. False Prophet 16:35, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

~~Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work.~~ Taken care of. False Prophet 8:42, 16 June 2006 (UTC) ~~See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a.~~ did not find any new ideas False Prophet 03:25, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

~~You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.~~ Looked there and will take it to a peer review fro, the gaming and computers project. False Prophet 04:04, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, Andy _t for creating the script. Executed by -- Chris Lester ^talk 12:43, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Another script has detected a date format error in this article. You should not use suffixes in dates e.g. '22nd'. Such errors can be detected and fixed quickly in any article: simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. This will give you a 'Dates' tab to press in edit mode. Hope that helps. bobblewik 17:42, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please do not strike out comments if they have not been dealt with. The error detected by the monobook 'dates' tool is still there. Either run the tool or search for '22nd'. Hope that helps. bobblewik 13:03, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]