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The Merchant and the Alchemist's Gate
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Sep 16, 2024
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"Coincidence and intention are two sides of a tapestry, my lord. You may find one more agreeable to look at, but you cannot say one is true and the other is false."
And so I entered the world of Fuwaad ibn Abbas, a merchant from Baghdad, who by coincidence (or intention) stumbles upon a wondrous metalsmith’s shop.
Bashaarat, the store owner, cordially greets Fuwaad. As he peruses the fascinating items on display, the craftsman casually mentions that he has something even more fantastic in the next room. Would Fuwaad like to see this extraordinary object? He wondered.
"Of course he would!" I exclaimed. "Take us to see this magical marvel at once!" My anticipation was electric, sparking like a molten blade in the process of being forged.
The clanging of metalwork faded into the background as Bashaarat spoke of his discovery — a gateway of seconds. He then stepped up to a metal hoop positioned chest-high in the middle of the room and gave a demonstration.
“Bashaarat thrust his arm through the hoop from the right side, but it did not extend out from the left. Instead, it was as if his arm were severed at the elbow, and he waved the stump up and down, and then pulled his arm out intact.
I had not expected to see such a learned man perform a conjuror's trick, but it was well done, and I applauded politely.
"Now wait a moment," he said as he took a step back.
I waited, and behold, an arm reached out of the hoop from its left side, without a body to hold it up. The sleeve it wore matched Bashaarat's robe. The arm waved up and down, and then retreated through the hoop until it was gone”
Fuwaad and I were both skeptical, but our curiosity was piqued, and we were eager to unravel this mystery.
The metalsmith shared with the merchant that there was more.
How could there be more? I pondered as I hurried after the two men as they entered another chamber. A large, polished metal circle waited silently — a gateway of years…
This is the best short story I’ve read this year! The Merchant and the Alchemist’s Gate is a brilliant tale that left me mesmerized. Take an hour to visit Bashaarat’s emporium. You’ll be glad you did.
Many thanks to my Goodreads friends for pointing the way to this terrific tale.
It’s free to read HERE.
And so I entered the world of Fuwaad ibn Abbas, a merchant from Baghdad, who by coincidence (or intention) stumbles upon a wondrous metalsmith’s shop.
Bashaarat, the store owner, cordially greets Fuwaad. As he peruses the fascinating items on display, the craftsman casually mentions that he has something even more fantastic in the next room. Would Fuwaad like to see this extraordinary object? He wondered.
"Of course he would!" I exclaimed. "Take us to see this magical marvel at once!" My anticipation was electric, sparking like a molten blade in the process of being forged.
The clanging of metalwork faded into the background as Bashaarat spoke of his discovery — a gateway of seconds. He then stepped up to a metal hoop positioned chest-high in the middle of the room and gave a demonstration.
“Bashaarat thrust his arm through the hoop from the right side, but it did not extend out from the left. Instead, it was as if his arm were severed at the elbow, and he waved the stump up and down, and then pulled his arm out intact.
I had not expected to see such a learned man perform a conjuror's trick, but it was well done, and I applauded politely.
"Now wait a moment," he said as he took a step back.
I waited, and behold, an arm reached out of the hoop from its left side, without a body to hold it up. The sleeve it wore matched Bashaarat's robe. The arm waved up and down, and then retreated through the hoop until it was gone”
Fuwaad and I were both skeptical, but our curiosity was piqued, and we were eager to unravel this mystery.
The metalsmith shared with the merchant that there was more.
How could there be more? I pondered as I hurried after the two men as they entered another chamber. A large, polished metal circle waited silently — a gateway of years…
This is the best short story I’ve read this year! The Merchant and the Alchemist’s Gate is a brilliant tale that left me mesmerized. Take an hour to visit Bashaarat’s emporium. You’ll be glad you did.
Many thanks to my Goodreads friends for pointing the way to this terrific tale.
It’s free to read HERE.
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Reading Progress
September 14, 2024
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cautionary-tale
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classic
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family-drama
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fables
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favorites
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hope
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humor
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magical-realism
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magic
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longing
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loss
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must-read
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second-chances
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short-stories
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splendid-writing
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I'm so glad that you picked this one up to read, it's such a wonderful story with that sprinkling of a magical essence, and reading your lovely review made my day!
Axl Oswaldo wrote: "Beautiful review, Kimber. I must read this story ASAP, I’m intrigued now. :)"
Thanks so much, Axl! I think you'll enjoy this. I look forward to your review! : )
Kevin wrote: "Delighted that you also enjoyed this magical piece of escapism, Kimber. Fab review!"Thanks to your brilliant review, I did indeed! Thank you for the link and your kind words, Kevin! : )
Cheri wrote: "I'm so glad that you picked this one up to read, it's such a wonderful story with that sprinkling of a magical essence, and reading your lovely review made my day!"Thanks very much, Cheri! It was a magical tale and so well done. I enjoyed your fab review as well. : )
Maureen wrote: "Beautiful review Kimber, thanks for the link."Thank you so much, Maureen! You're welcome. I hope you enjoy it too! : )
Chiang is a talented author and it comes as little surprise you enjoyed this. Have you read The Story of My Life which was adapted to a film titled Arrival starring Amy Adams?
Jonathan wrote: "Chiang is a talented author and it comes as little surprise you enjoyed this. Have you read The Story of My Life which was adapted to a film titled Arrival starring Amy Adams?"I haven't read The Story of My Life. Thank you for the recommendation, Jonathan!
Catherine wrote: "And free to read? Sounds fabulous! :) Thanks for the heads-up on this one, Kimber!!"It is a spectacular short story! I hope you enjoy it, Catherine. You're welcome! : )
Magical review Kimber!! I reckon ALL OF US would love to see this extraordinary object. Would you? More importantly would you leap through it?I would :))
Mark wrote: "Magical review Kimber!! I reckon ALL OF US would love to see this extraordinary object. Would you? More importantly would you leap through it?I would :))"
Thank you, Mark! I loved your review for this one.
Yes! I would leap! ; )
Barbara wrote: ""Best of the year says it all, Kimber. Lovely and convincing review."This was such an engaging read. Thank you very much, Barbara!
Vanessa wrote: "Great review, Kimber! I'm so glad you too enjoyed it!"Thanks so much, Vanessa! Once I started reading, I was hooked. : ) I'm glad to see all the stars from you as well.
Your review was so compellingly written, I was disappointed to find that it's a short story, Kimber! I have his collection and hope to get to it. Thanks for the link :)
switterbug (Betsey) wrote: "Kimber, lovely review, and thank you for providing the story, too!"Thank you, Betsey! You're welcome! I hope you enjoy this magical tale, too. : )
Jennifer wrote: "Your review was so compellingly written, I was disappointed to find that it's a short story, Kimber! I have his collection and hope to get to it. Thanks for the link :)"Thanks, Jennifer! It was a delightful read. I look forward to your thoughts. You're welcome!
Beautiful review, Kimber. And what high praise that it is the best short story you have read this year. Thanks for the link, added!
Daniel wrote: "Great review, Kimber. Thanks for sending the story our way."Thanks so much, Daniel! You're welcome! : )
Lorna wrote: "Beautiful review, Kimber. And what high praise that it is the best short story you have read this year. Thanks for the link, added!"Thank you very much, Lorna! It was a spectacular read. I hope you enjoy it too!
You're welcome. : )
Wow! That's a lot of praise as the best story all year! Thanks for the link Kimber. A wonderful review! ✨
Tina wrote: "Wow! That's a lot of praise as the best story all year! Thanks for the link Kimber. A wonderful review! ✨"This was a glorious short story. You're welcome. I hope you enjoy it, too.
Thank you, Tina! : )
Kat wrote: "I love a good magical story. This sounds enchanting! Great review, Kimber 🩷"Enchanting is a perfect word, Kat! Thank you kindly! : )
Wonderful review. You really captured the reading experience. I read this one in his collection Exhalation and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing where to find it for free!
Jonas wrote: "Wonderful review. You really captured the reading experience. I read this one in his collection Exhalation and really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing where to find it for free!"Thank you so much, Jonas! It is a magical short story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it, too.
You're welcome! : )
Nilanjana wrote: "It is a truly mesmerising story, I couldn’t agree more with your beautiful review, Kimber friend"Thank you so much, Nilanjana!🙏 I'm glad you enjoyed this terrific tale, too!😊
Margaret M - (too far behind to catch up wrote: "Fabulous review Kimber 💖"Thank you very much, Margaret! : )
Laysee wrote: "Superb review, Kimber. Thank you for the link to this enticing tale."Thank you kindly, Laysee! You're welcome. I hope you enjoy it too. : )

















I must read this story ASAP, I’m intrigued now. :)